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Post by jesshika on Nov 4, 2008 20:40:53 GMT -5
Jesshika gazed around the forest of Ohu. She had always heard many a tale of the soldiers and their legendary leaders. As she lept through the trees she quickly spotted a hawk purning its wings. She gave a smirk as she went towards it with all the silence and swiftness of Koga's Ninja Dogs. "Aki will enjoy this gift I bring with me."she thought as her tongue quickly came out and touched her nose. Then, with blind speed she pounced and killed her prey with a blind white blur of a furry of fangs. The young female soon landed as her fluffy tail curled up once more. Her teardrop shaped pearl pendant shined bright in the dawn light. This young ninja dog had traveled far from her home land to meet the dogs of Ohu.....the place her grandfather roamed during Gin's reign.
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Post by mossheart300 on Nov 20, 2008 21:15:46 GMT -5
nice story here is mine.
Mossheart out of breath but still she ran. Birds over head flaped their wings. she had a message for the dogs of ohu. Stopping in her tracks a huge ditch was in front of her. "Crap! I'll have to jump it." Backing up to jump she realized she was being watched for the trees. Truning around to face them a young blue and white dog stepped out of the bushes. Followed by many more dogs. Feeling her neck hair rise she said "What do you want?" "I'm weed leader of ohu,....... who are you?" The hair on her neck lay flat again she did it she found the ohu dogs. Dipping her head in respect and said "I come from a small town west of here..... we need your help weed. Or that evil demon will kill everyone." "What?" After she explain weed said that he will help. It seem longer to get home, but when they arrived she saw her mother, father and two sister fighting. She hwoled so loud that time seemed to stop.
srry i will finish story soon...... bye
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Post by Rinja on Nov 20, 2008 22:19:59 GMT -5
((Mossheart,this is RP not a fanfiction place! this is about Aki! Weed is dead if you hvent read'The Capture-Part 2',i like your writing but learn to RP the correct way.this is not a story.i will let you off right now,but one more time and i will ring your neck))
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Post by mossheart300 on Nov 20, 2008 22:37:41 GMT -5
now i will finish The demon ran away. "Sister!!" a big black and brown striped walked up. "I wondered where you ......... look out dogs!" She said as weed and the other came out of the bushes. "It's ok, their from ohu. I brought them to help" A her father came up "We should take them to the leader . Let's go!" Coming up to a big cave a dog siting on a big rock stopped them. "Who are they the leader will not be happy?!" "Shut up, rikia i have to see the leader . Now!" "Fine!" After walking though the cave for a while some dog were siting in a cricle. One looked up "She's back mossheart's ack!" Everyone looked up and a black shape bouned out of no where. "Mossheart, Weed and dog of ohu please follow me." Mossheart jumped after her and the others did so too. IN a big clearing the big dog now siting on a rock in the sun showed herself. "I'm Sunray leader of the bellto pack, and you are weed am i right?" He dipped he's head and notted. They talked for a whlie til "Mossheart! Come!" mossheart ears shot up. "Coming! Leader. Weed" mossheart ran to a group of dog outside the clearing. "What........ A Demon!" "That's why we called you." "OK.Let's GO." THey fought. THen the got tired. "Move!" Everyone move away. "Special move!" Blood was everywhere the demon was dead. Then mossheart fanted. She heard her name many times but she shoulded move anything. i will finish there  |
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